【中華之聲】《hug her when she is crying》詞曲原創作品分享 - 王慶
10月3號我寫了這首歌《hug her when she is crying》, 寫這首歌的靈感來自於近期的情感方面的不順利。等待了很久的異地戀人回國了,最終卻走向了悲傷的結局。那天晚上做了個噩夢,夢見他說事情發展不順利他要回南非去了,我在夢裏哭得很傷心很心痛,可能哭到身體起了保護反應我就在淩晨4點驚醒了。
醒了之後不知道為什麼腦子裏突然出現一段某個樂隊的一句旋律,我也想不起來是哪個樂隊,就是我的第一句歌詞的旋律。一句像不算抄襲吧?哈哈。然後大腦突然飛速對應了flight, cry, night三個英文單詞,發現恰好押韻。然後整個悲傷的故事突然轉變成了靈感突現就不再那麼悲傷了,我迷迷糊糊地怕醒了旋律忘記了,於是摸黑把歌詞和旋律哼唱記了下來然後又倒頭睡了。
醒了之後本來計畫寫論文的,因為靈感來了也不寫了,嘻嘻,花了一上午的時間寫歌。正好前段時間歐老師給我發了作曲的和絃進行。我以前都是用C大調簡單的和絃,這次想想應該換一個調做下嘗試,然後就嘗試用了D調,然後選擇了簡單的1625進行。發現D和絃完美匹配我原本的第一句旋律,於是把後續的旋律按照符合1625的方式進行了重新編排。所以形成了這首簡單的歌。
本來計畫不用變調夾,奈何技術不過關,左手彈Bm時和絃轉換不是很熟吧,彈出來老是有停頓,所以還是用變調夾拯救了自己,哈哈哈。發給歐老師聽之後他建議我加上一個前奏並將cold改為cruel,於是我加了4個小節的前奏並做了相應的修改。希望大家喜歡這首簡單的歌。
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hug her when she is crying
she had a bad dream last night
where you came for a talk
you said you booked an oneway flight
cuz it did not work out
then she suddenly started to cry
so hard she woke up at 4
hug her when she is crying
just hug her when she is crying
hug her when she is crying
dont be so cold and watch
tell her whats on your mind
just tell her whats on your mind
tell her whats on your mind
it should not hurt to talk
she had a bad dream last night
where you came for a talk
you said you booked an oneway flight
cuz it did not work out
then she suddenly started to cry
so hard she woke up at four
hug her when she is crying
just hug her when she is crying
hug her when she is crying
dont be so cold and watch
treat her like a silver lining
just treat her like a silver lining
treat her like a silver lining
she deserves your respect
hug her when she is crying
hug her she is crying
hug her she is crying
don't you see she is crying
don't be so cruel
don't be so cruel
don't be so cruel
she is begging you to hug her
王慶 於成都
2020年10月20日